From 196e355094de9cce7f9ef91ac5b2d9cf1824b7ef Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrew Scott <git@acscott.dev>
Date: Sun, 11 Dec 2022 01:40:22 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Minor grammatical errors

---
 src/pages/blog/masm_low_level_io.md    | 6 +++---
 src/pages/blog/openweather_grpc_api.md | 2 +-
 src/pages/cv.astro                     | 4 ++--
 src/pages/index.astro                  | 8 ++++----
 src/pages/projects.astro               | 4 ++--
 5 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pages/blog/masm_low_level_io.md b/src/pages/blog/masm_low_level_io.md
index 0b01da2..f4f9060 100644
--- a/src/pages/blog/masm_low_level_io.md
+++ b/src/pages/blog/masm_low_level_io.md
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
 ---
 layout: "../../layouts/PostLayout.astro"
 title: "MASM & Low Level I/O"
-description: "Using the Microsoft Macro Assembler for low level operations"
+description: "Using the Microsoft Macro Assembler for low-level operations"
 pubDate: "Mar 26 2022"
 heroImage: "/post_images/masm_low_level_io.jpg"
 ---
 
 Definitely check this one out if you're interested in MASM or IA-32 (x86) Assembly
-Language. This program uses string primitives, macros and procedures to perform low
-level I/O operations with the Microsoft Macro Assembler (MASM). MASM is an x86
+Language. This program uses string primitives, macros and procedures to perform
+low-level I/O operations with the Microsoft Macro Assembler (MASM). MASM is an x86
 assembler.
 
 The program asks for 10 signed integers from the user as strings. The strings are
diff --git a/src/pages/blog/openweather_grpc_api.md b/src/pages/blog/openweather_grpc_api.md
index b0fea5e..c8b4e30 100644
--- a/src/pages/blog/openweather_grpc_api.md
+++ b/src/pages/blog/openweather_grpc_api.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 layout: "../../layouts/PostLayout.astro"
 title: "OpenWeather gRPC API"
-description: "A high performance API for gRPC clients to fetch weather data"
+description: "A high-performance API for gRPC clients to fetch weather data"
 pubDate: "Aug 28 2022"
 heroImage: "/post_images/openweather_grpc_api_uml.jpg"
 ---
diff --git a/src/pages/cv.astro b/src/pages/cv.astro
index be72517..9bb7d68 100644
--- a/src/pages/cv.astro
+++ b/src/pages/cv.astro
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ import TimeLineElement from "../components/cv/TimeLine.astro";
     hardware necessary to play them, were always evolving so I became determined
     to build my own desktop computer in high school. Since then, I've built at
     least another dozen computers and a couple home servers to host my own
-    privacy focussed cloud services. These experiences have led me to become a
+    privacy focused cloud services. These experiences have led me to become a
     strong proponent of open source software, in part due to its transparency,
     quality, innovation, and diversity.
   </div>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ import TimeLineElement from "../components/cv/TimeLine.astro";
     <TimeLineElement
       title="Senior Representative, Annuity Claims"
       subtitle="From Mar 2013 to Mar 2017 at New York Life Insurance Company"
-      desc="Managed migration of annuity claims processing from legacy mainframe system to a modern web interface, conducting quality assurance testing while ensuring compliance with state laws. Implemented new correspondence templates increasing efficiency and accuracy, saving approximately 100 hours per processor per year."
+      desc="Managed migration of annuity claims processing from legacy mainframe system to a modern web interface, conducting quality assurance testing while ensuring compliance with state laws. Implemented new correspondence templates to increase efficiency and accuracy, saving approximately 100 hours per processor per year."
     />
     <TimeLineElement
       title="Representative"
diff --git a/src/pages/index.astro b/src/pages/index.astro
index e949187..6bf7d2a 100644
--- a/src/pages/index.astro
+++ b/src/pages/index.astro
@@ -21,20 +21,20 @@ const last_posts = posts.slice(0, 3);
     <div class="py-2">
       <text class="text-lg">
         I created this site to showcase my projects, and occasionally blog about
-        their developement. Check out the sidebar, or continue reading if you’d
-        like to know more!
+        their developement. Feel free to navigate the site via the sidebar, or continue
+        reading if you’d like to know more about my recent work
       </text>
     </div>
     <div class="mt-8">
       <a class="btn" href="https://fosstodon.org/@ascott" target="_blank">
-        Connect on The Fediverse</a
+        Find me on Mastodon</a
       >
       <a
         href="https://codeberg.org/andcscott"
         target="_blank"
         class="btn btn-outline ml-5"
       >
-        Show Me the Code</a
+        I Just Want the Code</a
       >
     </div>
   </div>
diff --git a/src/pages/projects.astro b/src/pages/projects.astro
index cfce624..df4c74a 100644
--- a/src/pages/projects.astro
+++ b/src/pages/projects.astro
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ import HorizontalCard from "../components/HorizontalCard.astro";
   <HorizontalCard
     title="Exercise Tracker"
     img="/project_images/exercise_tracker.jpg"
-    desc="A full stack MERN app for tracking your exercises."
+    desc="A full-stack MERN app for tracking your exercises."
     url="https://codeberg.org/andcscott/ExerciseTracker"
     badge="SPA"
   />
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ import HorizontalCard from "../components/HorizontalCard.astro";
   <HorizontalCard
     title="MASM & Low Level I/O"
     img="/project_images/masm_low_level_io.jpg"
-    desc="Using the Microsoft Macro Assembler for low level operations"
+    desc="Using the Microsoft Macro Assembler for low-level operations"
     url="https://git.acscott.dev/a/MASM-Low-Level-IO"
     badge="Assembly"
   />